this is not traditional haiku so tell me how do you structure your lines I too have tried to match words with images I get the stirrings inside of you that seek release in compressed lines and written images not easy...I honor you for going forward
Hello Suz, No its not traditional as I suppose one would have to be born into the language to truly understand traditional Haiku and as I am not I chose the next best thing by researching "free form haiku" online. I guess I should add "freeform" on my title. Since my teen years I have always loved "Basho" for his "aha moments" that I could relate to.
this is not traditional haiku
ReplyDeleteso tell me how do you structure your lines
I too have tried to match words with images
I get the stirrings inside of you that seek release
in compressed lines and written images
not easy...I honor you for going forward
Hello Suz, No its not traditional as I suppose one would have to be born into the language to truly understand traditional Haiku and as I am not I chose the next best thing by researching "free form haiku" online. I guess I should add "freeform" on my title. Since my teen years I have always loved "Basho" for his "aha moments" that I could relate to.
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