Tuesday, January 19, 2016



  1. this is not traditional haiku
    so tell me how do you structure your lines
    I too have tried to match words with images
    I get the stirrings inside of you that seek release
    in compressed lines and written images
    not easy...I honor you for going forward

    1. Hello Suz, No its not traditional as I suppose one would have to be born into the language to truly understand traditional Haiku and as I am not I chose the next best thing by researching "free form haiku" online. I guess I should add "freeform" on my title. Since my teen years I have always loved "Basho" for his "aha moments" that I could relate to.